through my eyes

Dutch Photo Eyes 3 Jennifer RemmeYou are right
The things that You have trained me for
and what You do to me
are beyond my wildest dreams

You are right
My fantasies can only go so far
because of limited knowledge
I am naïve

You are right
I need to describe
what I want to feel
not what I think we should do

I am right
If you share the wonder
through my eyes
all will be new for You again


14 Comments on “through my eyes”

  1. esther says:

    beautiful…and such a poetic way to move forward. xxx


  2. mrmodigliani says:

    It is wonderful when you write dievca.


  3. Allison says:

    Absolutely divine!


  4. hispetitelle says:

    This is utterly beautiful and you have no idea how much it speaks to me. Perfect.

    May I reblog?


  5. hispetitelle says:

    Reblogged this on The Submission of Elle and commented:
    My lovely friend, dievca, wrote such beautiful words I just had to share.



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